Glorious in daunted blues
Victorious in red
Tattered edges
Blowing free
Living past the dead.
Draped for freedom
Covering truth
A doubled meaning lies
Glorious in daunted blues
Victorious in red
Tattered edges
Blowing free
Living past the dead.
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truthfully speaking you r a poetic mind,,i have a similar poem i think you'd love.How are you?
I like the repetition. Gives the whole poem atmosphere and rhythm. I've always admired people who can structure poems this way and still make sense.
Bravo.
Hey Robin...I'm great. I hope you are as well. I would love to read you similar poem. I'm going to check right not to see if you posted it.
I am big into repetition and parallelism. Thanks for your kind words.
I love this piece it is awesome! True Poetry.
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